Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Four Senses

Students write a word paint about experiencing a drizzly morning using all senses except for sight.


I felt some drips on my head and I heard chain rattling. I also smelled something sweet and wet. I felt a cold bar of metal against me. The cold, moist droplets continued to fall on me. I heard mettle rubbing and birds chirping  The atmosphere was cold. It felt like forever. The grass felt really beautiful.  I heard some horns and honks. Also weed whackers, I think. Maybe a lawn mower. I heard cars and a whistle.

By:
Scotty

I heard a humming bird in a nearby tree. I heard a lot of cars and honking. I heard a scraping sound and the rambling of wheels and rain. I felt nice, kinda good, like my cousin's house in Oregon in their backyard. I smelled the rain and I smelled grass and moist dirt and it tasted like water and moist dirt. It kind of smelt like wet wood and wet cement. Wet trees.

I touched and felt wet water droplets and a weird bug rammed into my hand, but I don't know where it went. I felt water dripping around me. I felt some heat.

It tasted good, like clear water in a small stream and a the same time it felt warm, moist and it felt cozy, sweet, nice, and it tasted very nice like Oregon.

By:
Hero

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